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I was walking towards the entrance of the circus called GHFC, I was about 10 at the time, turning 11 soon. The circus was crowded with people, some dressed as clowns. Liam was the main clown and
everyone loved him until something happened at GHFC. I’ll start from the beginning, we’ll continue with what I was saying before my last sentence. I was with my parents and my crush, my crush and I
were good friends. My crush's name was Chloe. My parents bought us a red clown nose and we put them on.
We found seats at the front, right next to the set. I sat next to Chloe and my parents sat on either side of us. The lights turned oﬀ and a spot light turned on. In the spotlight was a guy in a suit and
holding a microphone in his hand.
“Welcome all people, to GHFC, I’ll introduce you to the clowns.” The guy said “We have Kat… Doug… Pen…Lin anddd…” the guy put his hand to his ear.
“LIAM!!!” The crowd yelled and started cheering. As each clown was named, they would do something cool like a backﬂip. But as Liam was named the spotlight went oﬀ and shined up to a platform
where Liam was standing. He jumped oﬀ and swung, he let go of the rope and did a triple backﬂip into a deep pool.
The crowd was cheering. The clowns started doing tricks, one was riding a unicycle on a tightrope while juggling ﬂaming balls.
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“Come back again” the announcer said when the show was over. Everyone was out of the tent when it started on ﬁre. I saw Chloe running away from the tent with a lighter in her hand. People started
to scream. I looked around to ﬁnd my parents but remembered that they were still in the tent.
I ran inside the tent, burning my left arm and leg badly but I ignored the pain. The place was already hard to breathe in and see. I was running around to ﬁnd my parents when I tripped on something
and fell. When I looked over I was horriﬁed by what I saw. There was my mom and dad, badly burned, but it wasn’t enough to tell that it was them. They still had their clown noses on, my mom and dad
were both wearing the same necklace and ring. I started to cry on their lifeless bodies, after 5 minutes I grabbed their necklaces and rings, not caring if they burned my hands.
I ran back out of the tent covered in ash and smoke, my left side started hurting really bad. As I keep running away from the tent I start to think of what I'm going to do to Chloe. “WHY CHLOE, JUST
WHY?” I yell out, starting to cry again. “I’m going to kill her” when i said that I realized I actually meant it. I ran to the car, breaking the window to get in. I reached down and unlocked the door, as I
opened the door I realized the keys were still in there. I brushed oﬀ the broken glass oﬀ the seat and got in. When I started the car I closed the door, then I drove oﬀ.
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Surprisingly I got home without being pulled over by the cops. By the time I got home my left side was in severe pain. I got out of the car and walked to the front door. I grabbed the spare key from a
little hidden spot on the wall next to the door. As I opened the front door my dog Hades came waddling over to me wagging his tale. “Hey bud” I said, slowly getting down on one knee and then started
to pet him. “Who’s a good boy, you are” Hades was wagging his tail the whole time.
“Where’s ya parents?” Someone asked from behind. I turn around to see a demon-like looking guy standing in the front door.
“Who are you? Where did you come from?” Hades was growling at him but the guy did seem bothered at all.
“That’s not the right question, the right question is what I will do.”
“And what’s that?”
“I can help ya with what ya want to do right now.”
“Killing Chloe?” I looked at him confused.
“Yes, and more, like bringing ya parents back”
“That’s not possible, they're both dead, I saw them, they’re lifeless bodies burnt.” I started crying again after crying almost the whole way home.
“For most people yes, but I'm diﬀerent, ya see I'm not actually human.”
“I can see that. But who are you exactly?”
“i'm a demon, people call me Sinister”
“um, ok, why’d you want to come and help me?”
“Ya see, I help people when they want to kill someone. I’ve helped thousands this year including ya little Girlfriend Chloe” as I heard him say that, anger started to “Boil” up inside.
“WHY WOULD YOU HELP HER KILL MY PARENTS?”
“Calm down boy.”
“NO, YOU JUST SAID YOU KILLED MY PARENTS.”
“Not kill, but helped kill, yes.”
“OH, YOU SON OF A B****.”I clenched my ﬁst, my anger rising even more.
“I said I could bring them back.”
“Yea, I don’t believe you, just because you're a demon doesn’t mean shit.” Hades starts whimpering now. I look at my dog. “It's ok boy, I'm not mad at you.” The Guy chuckles.
“Cute dog.”
”Don’t even talk to me.” I snapped at him.
“Hey, I'm just tryna help.”
“By killing my parents.” The demon sighs
“Ya want your parents back or not?”
“I do, but I don't trust you. I don’t even know if you're telling the truth.”
“I may not be able to make ya trust me, but ya can.” I sigh
“Fine, but you have to bring my parents back after, deal?” I put out my hand
“Deal.” He shakes my hand then disappears. I feel my body tingle a little. I had a feeling like I should go to the bathroom and look in the mirror for some reason. I get up and walk to the bathroom
looking in the mirror, my eyes were completely black with white pupils.
“What the…”
“I’m in side you now” a familiar voice said
“Is that you Sinister?”
“Yes it is me”
“Why are my eyes diﬀerent?”
“Because I possess ya right now.”
“Isn’t there a diﬀerent way to help me kill Chloe?”
“Nope.”
“So, I'm going to have to look creepy?”
“I can give ya a mask.”
“Um ok I guess.” A mask appears. It’s a clown mask with red cheeks and red and blue hair. “A clown mask, seriously.”
“What, it’s something a kid would wear isn’t it?”
“No, not really.”
“Welp too late now, put it on.” I put it on then try taking it oﬀ.
“Why won't it come oﬀ?”
“ ‘Cause it can’t once ya put it on.”
“Even when the deal is done?”
“Well um the deal will last forever.”
“WAIT, WHAT! Why did you not tell me this before?”
“ ‘Cause ya wouldn’t have made the deal.” I sigh
“How come I can’t get mad at you?”
“ ‘Cause it's part of the deal.”
“What else do I need to know?”
“That’s it.” I sigh and walk out of the bathroom.
“So when do I have to kill Chloe?”
“Whenever ya want.”
“Ok so can we do it now then?”
“Fine by me.”
“Ok.”